i have a song that i wrote and in just a sec i will go and find it and you can tell me if it sounds ttly bad.

ok


its called it's gonna be okay


have you ever felt, no one loves you
when you need them there's no one to turn to
well i am here to say, that everything's gonna be okay

close your eyes, sit back enjoy the ride.
you don't have to hide what's inside.
it doesn't matter what they think today,
because it's all gonna be okay Hey! Hey!
it's all gonna be okay

when you're sitting there all by yourself
put you're problems up on the shelf
dance along and sing out loud,
dont be shy stand tall and proud

having trouble? now don't you worry
there's no need to get in a flurry!
because i am here to say,
that everythings gonna be okay.

close your eyes, sit back enjoy the ride.
you don't have to hide what's inside.
it doesn't matter what they think today,
because it's all gonna be okay Hey! Hey!
it's all gonna be okay

close your eyes, sit back enjoy the ride.
you don't have to hide what's inside.
it doesn't matter what they think today,
because it's all gonna be okay Hey! Hey!
it's all gonna be okay
Hey! Hey! it's all gonna be okay!

awsome!!!!!

thanks i am not really sure if i like it or not but u said that u like reviewed songs and lyrics 4 a lot of bands at ur skool so i think i can trust u 2 tell me the truth. and if i evr post a song on here that u dont like then plz tell me. i wont get mad i promise.

no problem honisty is my best polisy even is i cant spell

heres mine! i wrote it for a band of guys so here


Don't Go
Ever dream I have seems so real I wish the dream would finish and let me know the end
I woke up. Dyes confused thinking of a way to bring me back to you.

Don't go, when everything feels so right.
So just close your eyes.

Time has passed…
Thinking of, all the beautiful things we have seen.
I close my eyes!
And dream of you.
To bring me back to you.

this is one i wrote for a guy too



Cry

Come home searching for something more. The pain inside is slowly killing her. She looks for love, all she feels in shame. She fights for what's not reality.

Don't Cry, Don't you ever cry.
Don't Cry, Don't you ever cry.

Questioning everything she knows, She never feels love from her home.
Wanting more
She screams for love!
(Her heart is torn, her life unfolds)


it repeats

that was awesome! u r really good! that is soooo coolies, i wish i could rite better songs but i cant an 1 day, my dream is 2 rite songs like FOB sings. like the gibberish, doesnt make since unless u look @ it in a funny way type lyrics. i have no idea wat im tlkin bout but just go wit it

thanks i can write forever about things that are important to me but writing an essay about why you should be in beta or somthin noway i just cant i totaly block out

i wrote this for soomeone they had a fight one of there friends they got writers block i could relat & i thought it was sad so i helped out

its called undone (they picked not me)


I can see it your eyes you're hurting
But pain is part of learning who you are
All these truths can sometimes be deceiving
When your whole world comes crashing to the ground

Tell me everything you need now anything at all
and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall

yeah, When you come undone
When you come undone

You know I can't be like everybody
Cause I can't tell you what you want to hear
I don't know if I can make it better
All I know is I will be around

Tell me everything you need now anything at all
and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall

yeah, When you come undone
When you come undone

When all your plans are made out lying on the floor
and all your dreams are turning into nothing more
When all your hope has left you know you're not alone
Just hold on
Hold on

Tell me everything you need now anything at all
and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall

yeah, When you come undone
When you come undone

we worked together on this one please be honist mot of my other friends didnt like it so its ok